English 7.1.21

Today, Mrs. White and I would like you to complete your English task (if you haven’t done so already) and then you will be proof-reading and marking it. 

Firstly, please make sure you have completely finished your writing task.

Now, I would like you to get a purple pen or just using an alternative coloured pen to the one you wrote with, please proof- read and edit your work.

  • Have you written at least two paragraphs and do they link? Does every sentence make sense?
  • Can you include any more adjectives to extend your noun phrases?
  • Have you included prepositions?
  • Do you have at least one fronted adverbial?
  • Have your spellings been checked? If so, have you made the necessary corrections if needed?

Please ensure you have thoroughly checked your work so you are able to write up the final copy tomorrow.

Please feel free to email us if you are stuck in any way.

Value

Service

Jesus was called the ‘servant king’; his mission was to serve God and to serve all those people he met, through his teaching, his example and the way he led his life.  Who are the unsung heroes who serve us?
• at school
• at home
• in our clubs
How do you serve others?
• at school
• at home
• in your clubs

Thought of the Day

“There is more happiness in giving than receiving”
The words of Jesus recorded in Acts 20.35 – The Good News Bible

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