Today, Mrs. White and I would like you to complete your English task (if you haven’t done so already) and then you will be proof-reading and marking it. 

Firstly, please make sure you have completely finished your writing task.

Now, I would like you to get a purple pen or just using an alternative coloured pen to the one you wrote with, please proof- read and edit your work.

• Have you written at least two paragraphs and do they link? Does every sentence make sense?
• Can you include any more adjectives to extend your noun phrases?
• Have you included prepositions?
• Do you have at least one fronted adverbial?
• Have your spellings been checked? If so, have you made the necessary corrections if needed?

Please ensure you have thoroughly checked your work so you are able to write up the final copy tomorrow.

Please feel free to email us if you are stuck in any way.

6.1.21 English writing task

Please continue with your main English lessons on the Oak National Academy website. Remember to work your way through the lesson by clicking ‘next’ in the bottom right-hand corner and to complete the questions on the slideshow. This is referred to as the worksheet. 

Year 4: https://classroom.thenational.academy/subjects-by-year/year-4/subjects/english/

Year 5: https://classroom.thenational.academy/subjects-by-year/year-5/subjects/english

Please continue with your reading and Bedrock Vocabulary work. You may use Education City for more English if you would like. 

If you are having any difficulties accessing these websites, please e-mail me. 

Alternatively, I am happy for you to draft and write your own piece of writing for your English. Please e-mail me your work as I would love to see what you have done! 

Please continue with your main English lessons on the Oak National Academy website. Remember to work your way through the lesson by clicking ‘next’ in the bottom right-hand corner and to complete the questions on the slideshow. This is referred to as the worksheet. 

Year 4: https://classroom.thenational.academy/subjects-by-year/year-4/subjects/english/

Year 5: https://classroom.thenational.academy/subjects-by-year/year-5/subjects/english

Please continue with your reading and Bedrock Vocabulary work. You may use Education City for more English if you would like. 

If you are having any difficulties accessing these websites, please e-mail me. 

Alternatively, I am happy for you to draft and write your own piece of writing for your English. Please e-mail me your work as I would love to see what you have done! 

Please continue with your main English lessons on the Oak National Academy website. Remember to work your way through the lesson by clicking ‘next’ in the bottom right-hand corner and to complete the questions on the slideshow. This is referred to as the worksheet. 

Year 4: https://classroom.thenational.academy/subjects-by-year/year-4/subjects/english/

Year 5: https://classroom.thenational.academy/subjects-by-year/year-5/subjects/english

Please continue with your reading and Bedrock Vocabulary work. You may use Education City for more English if you would like. 

If you are having any difficulties accessing these websites, please e-mail me. 

Alternatively, I am happy for you to draft and write your own piece of writing for your English this week. Please e-mail me your work as I would love to see what you have done! 

Please continue with your main English lessons on the Oak National Academy website. Remember to work your way through the lesson by clicking ‘next’ in the bottom right-hand corner and to complete the questions on the slideshow. This is referred to as the worksheet. 

Year 4: https://classroom.thenational.academy/subjects-by-year/year-4/subjects/english/

Year 5: https://classroom.thenational.academy/subjects-by-year/year-5/subjects/english

Please continue with your reading and Bedrock Vocabulary work. You may use Education City for more English if you would like. 

If you are having any difficulties accessing these websites, please e-mail me. 

Please continue with your main English lessons on the Oak National Academy website. Remember to work your way through the lesson by clicking ‘next’ in the bottom right-hand corner and to complete the questions on the slideshow. This is referred to as the worksheet. 

Year 4: https://classroom.thenational.academy/subjects-by-year/year-4/subjects/english/

Year 5: https://classroom.thenational.academy/subjects-by-year/year-5/subjects/english

Please continue with your reading and Bedrock Vocabulary work. You may use Education City for more English if you would like. 

If you are having any difficulties accessing these websites, please e-mail me. 

Please continue with your main English lessons on the Oak National Academy website. Remember to work your way through the lesson by clicking ‘next’ in the bottom right-hand corner and to complete the questions on the slideshow. This is referred to as the worksheet. 

Year 4: https://classroom.thenational.academy/subjects-by-year/year-4/subjects/english/

Year 5: https://classroom.thenational.academy/subjects-by-year/year-5/subjects/english

Please continue with your reading and Bedrock Vocabulary work. You may use Education City for more English if you would like. 

If you are having any difficulties accessing these websites, please e-mail me. 

Your main English lessons are now being delivered through Oak National Academy. Please watch the videos, pause and do the activities and quizzes. 

Year 4: https://www.thenational.academy/online-classroom/year-4/english#subjects

Year 5: https://www.thenational.academy/online-classroom/year-5/english#subjects

Please continue with your reading and Bedrock Vocabulary work. You may use Education City for more English if you would like. 

Please do the activity set for you on Education City. 

There is an extension activity below if you would like.

Application activity on commas

Fire Drills Differentiated Reading Comprehension Activity

writing composition